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I went back to my pool scene for 'Dream 3'. I realised it didn't look right because it didn't look like the swimmer was swimming, she was just floating there. So I added some different tones to her body and the water to give it more depth and to make it look like bits of her body were in and out of the water:

It definitely makes a difference - the swimmer is less bright and fits into the image more comfortably. I made her smaller to make the open space seem more infinite and imposing. I think this design goes well with the song - it is relaxing and the open expanse of water gives a sense it is endless, like the 8 hour song.